Suggestion from Rachana:

So I am suggesting replace this "If you don't have a Globus Online account, you can sign-up for one at https://www.globusonine.org/SignUp." with

"If you don't have a Globus Online account or are using it with ESG Gateway for the first time, please follow instructions at https://www.globusonline.org/esg/"

If you can tolerate one more suggestion, I would much rather prefer GO support being called "beta" rather than "experimental". But just a preference there.